Attempt 1
- very little illusion because there is lack of contrast within the motif itself
** is it necessary to use the logo anyway????
- since my concept: connect two things to create vibe, I might as well simplify it and just use the two colours and create optical illusion
Name card
- apply vibrating colours in op art
- empty space at info side so that I can leave some personal doodle or note to the person I gave the card to
- apply vibrating colours in op art
- empty space at info side so that I can leave some personal doodle or note to the person I gave the card to
Envelope
- feels very corporate
- image could be clearly seen at a distance of 2-3 meters
CV
- very formal
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Feedback:
Feedback:
- attempt 2 is better
- try print name card on shimmering paper to see whether optical illusion effect could increase or not
- name card info side can do without element, make sure it is comfortable and pleasing to the eyes
- envelope flap's lines are too wide
- cover letter's element could change to cyan and magenta 2pt lines
- poster size could reduce to newsletter size, and image could be seen at reading distance, more functional and reasonable
- cartoon image in poster doesn't fit the overall feel
- try incorporating the elements (cyan and magenta lines) to newsletter-brochure, CV
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